yay poll closed!! ...with three votes, you all decided that i should put a bit up every week. i was gonna do it this afternoon (woke up at 12) but my laptop kept stuffing up about systems and disk drives and all this crap but my dad fixed it and now i can post it :) ok, here we go! oh, and i dunno where to put chapters in my novel so its just a block of writing. and also, i need a fire animal :( if you have one, that doesnt start with D, please tell me. i dont want to use a jaguar. it fits, but i think ill use it for something else. a fox is out of the question too. you'll see why. i made this all up, use your imagination for parts. please comment :)
HOWLER
she was chasing adventures. he was chasing girls.
Long ago, when the earth was just formed, God created two eggs. One contained the sun, the other, the moon. When they both hatched, night and day were formed. Yet not without a feud that begun when the sun wanted to rule the moon, and vice versa. Each day they edged closer and closer to each other until they collided, and another two eggs formed. The sun was given the first one, a beautiful gold stone that was as hot as the sun itself. Out hatched a tiny red bird that even without feathers was the most enchanting thing the sun had ever seen. It was a phoenix, the bird of eternity. The moon's egg was silver and felt like the chilling surface of the dark side of the moon. It also hatched a creature of eternity, a dragon. It too was enchanting, with tiny blue scales that rippled along its body. Seeing the living creatures, the sun and moon decided they would take turns lighting the earth and call the dragon and phoenix 'guardians'. During the day, the phoenix called Aliya would stay on Sunhill, the piece of land where she hatched. At night, Dralion the dragon grew on Moonridge, the piece of land where he hatched. As he creatures grew, their eyes opened to see what was really around them. Nothing. Seeing it as a problem, the phoenix and dragon decided to create the four elements, fire, water, earth and air. Being so young, they decided to copy what the sun and moon did to create them. Because they only saw each other when the moon and sun were changing, they waited until twilight to try their task. When the time came, Aliya and Dralion faced each other, ready for impact. In the speed of light, they collided into each other, and out came the four elements in the form of animals. When the antelope fell, grass, trees, mountains and land formed. As the jaguar fell, heat, lava, fire, and the stars formed. When the dove fell, the sky, clouds and atmosphere formed and when the dolphin fell, water, ice and the sea formed. Happy and exhausted with what they created, the dragon and phoenix cared for the animals, teaching them their knowledge and magic. When they were old enough, the elements shifted into their creations, and the first humans and animals set foot into the new world.
Really good beginning. Write more please :-)
ReplyDeletethanks :) ill post up the second part next saturday.
ReplyDeleteThat's realy good! How about a salamander for a fire animal??
ReplyDeleteYES!!!!! THANKS!!! i thought about a reptile, but i couldnt find one. thanks franky (Y)
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